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PostSubject: Mary Sue Parody   Sun Jan 02, 2011 11:33 am

I wrote this two years ago. Never finished. The premise is that a girl gets sucked into a land where everyone wants to eat her, but because they are bored they play up the whole "long lost hero" shebang.

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PostSubject: Re: Mary Sue Parody   Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:47 pm

Oh, how I laughed and laughed! I like this Quill! You should continue it. I have some ideas if you would like to hear them?

Time for some critique no? Well, first I thought "She should have more of a beginning" But then I thought about it, and realized if not for the small little grammatical errors she did wonderfully well. So continue on this journey of not-so-epic proportions.

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PostSubject: Re: Mary Sue Parody   Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:46 am

Hahah! Nicely done.

I was just about to write "I liked your characters" when I accidentally knocked my big sticky-tape off my desk onto my foot. Ow. Anyway, I like you characters Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Mary Sue Parody   Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:38 pm

Allysmurfy wrote:
Oh, how I laughed and laughed! I like this Quill! You should continue it. I have some ideas if you would like to hear them?

Time for some critique no? Well, first I thought "She should have more of a beginning" But then I thought about it, and realized if not for the small little grammatical errors she did wonderfully well. So continue on this journey of not-so-epic proportions.

Thanks for the reply! Sure, I'd be glad to hear ideas! I stopped because I forgot/ran out of ideas.

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Hahah! Nicely done.

I was just about to write "I liked your characters" when I accidentally knocked my big sticky-tape off my desk onto my foot. Ow. Anyway, I like you characters Smile

I'm glad you liked my characters! Did you even like the terrible terrible Mary-Sue? Or did you just love to hate her? Either way, I'm glad you liked!
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