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PostSubject: Rambles and Non-sense   Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:30 pm

While I chide myself on my vocabulary, and while my grammar is usually good. I take no great pride in my rambles, and my usual lack of spelling. (Yes, you may laugh here with out being thrown in the brig) I take no pride in my poetry or prose, sometimes it may be good and usually its horrible. I just felt that every once and awhile I must write something that will probably make little to no sense to others.
So, yes your...wonderful Queen Ally is posting some of her greatest works here on Illusion. You may critique, but I'm not promising to fix anything.

Not Here

Its not here today
nor tomorrow
or the day after that
Its gone away
far far away
to land unknown
where blue birds chirp in the falling snow
where the sun shines bright
I only know its not here today

Over the edge

A whisper a trickle
A movement affects the crowd
there is laughing
its like a pebble dropped in a lake
the ripple increases going far and wide
there is a scream
no laughing
there is a silence
not a sound
there is a meek laugh
no one joins in
there is some one who went to far.

Procrastination

I wait, I ponder
I ponder while you work
I work to late
I began to late
Its to late.

Many a headache

Its a headache to school kids
It is greeted with groans by most
Its a conundrum for most
It goes under many different names
It can't fool me I know exactly whatever it is
No matter the name
In some cases, yes I'm quite good.
In others a I shudder and silently mutter
“I hate math”

I will have more at some point.

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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:07 pm

Aaah, the genius of 'our queen' Ally.

It's really good. You have a gift. I try writing a poem-y sort of thing and it looks like it was written by a hamster who fell in an ink pot.

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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:41 pm

That was a wonderful description! I was in math(s) and I realized that I wanted to write something about bannas. Why? I have no idea, it may be that my Math(s) teacher is a horrible drawer or that odd random thought you have at the end of the day.

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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:49 pm

Thanks! I often do random little bits of weird description-y stuff when I don't know what to say... it would have sounded boring to say "my poem writing is dull"

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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:55 pm

That it would.

Life is boring
Who has answers? It depends on who has the question.
Life is Dull
If I have a question, who will have the answer?
Life is Confusing
Is there even a answer to my question?
Life is Life
And yet, I find myself with more questions.

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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:59 pm

Hey that's good!

To be (dull) or not to be (dull) that is the question. Well, more of a question not the question. I mean, well, there are billions and billions of questions and, well, when I say billions I'm obviously counting the answers with the questions and...

you know what? I have no idea what the answer is.


The poem's good, Ally. But it does throw up... erm... lots of questions.

Níl a fhios agam cá ndeachaigh go ...


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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:32 am

Would you like your heart for mine?
Because yours is on the line
Would you like your heart for mine?
Because whats mine is yours
Would you like your heart for mine?
And its hangin' by a vine
Would you like your heart for mine?
An' maybe one day we'll dine
Would you like your heart for mine?
But till then, your mine.

Random, but based off this song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lLJf9qJHR3E

Do you have a wish?
And what if its for death?
Would you jump if you had the chance?
Would you take our hearts?
Or mine?
I really f***** it up this time
But now its too late
'Cause I'm already falling down
I going down, to heaven, and up to hell
I'll meat the black good, 'Cause that's his wish
Not Mine.

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PostSubject: Re: Rambles and Non-sense   Sun Mar 13, 2011 11:18 pm

Fleeting, fetching.

Darkness, loneliness

I want to write you a story, but it will be sad.

I want to tell you something but it will break your heart.

I bite my lip in silence knowing that nothing is what you need to hear.

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My thoughts-their vague.

My hands- they just will my fingers to move.

My brain- its really thinking

Its just words that need to be spoon upon a will

I just need the right word.

To tell, you. How I feel.

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